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excellent excellent this is totally absorbing!

- Saturday, September 22, 2001 at 13:29:10 (EDT)

I love the feeling the design of the site gives to your writing.

- Tuesday, July 24, 2001 at 22:38:38 (EDT)

http://www.rvs.uni-hannover.de/people/voeckler/tune/EN/tune.html#ndd

- Wednesday, February 14, 2001 at 13:47:59 (EST)

was dark and the bushes have bees, big bees, bad bees, mean bees.

- Tuesday, October 17, 2000 at 02:57:35 (EDT)

Okay, so the end of Chapter 13 was changed, and Chapter 14 added on there at last, as well. What's gonna happen, huh? You're leaving us all in suspense, and some of us have been floating around here for long over a year now. You tease! Give us more! =)

- Friday, September 15, 2000 at 13:03:14 (EDT)

Sorry for the anonymous handle...the Shadow likes the shadows in the Park! Who knows what evil lurks in the darkness of the web?

- Friday, August 11, 2000 at 14:16:18 (EDT)

I love it. It's so...undescribable. Please keep updating.

- Sunday, April 02, 2000 at 16:14:02 (EDT)

Your site continues to awe me. Come to Georgia. Join my Robotussin Illuminati.

- Saturday, March 18, 2000 at 03:18:18 (EST)

thank you. Yes, indeed, there wlil be a 14; there is a deal of it already written but not posted as I'm still playing with it. I hope to have it up by mid-February. Thanks for your visit and your kind note. -the custodian

- Monday, January 17, 2000 at 21:18:28 (EST)

Someone on the internet knows how to write. Great day in the morning. Will there ever be a Chapter 14?

- Friday, January 14, 2000 at 08:19:00 (EST)

Subject: I have "insides" Date: Tue, 02 Nov 1999 12:14:15 EST Could be that they are maladapted. Could be a precursor of the borderline I seem to walk along. Could just be me. My personality, personified by an ache that won't go. I see people all the way through to their bones. I see them figet, fib, put meat in their traps for others to bite on. I see them hunt and I see them kill. Could it be that my intuition is murdering my chances of remaining alive? Over-sensitivity is not for me to cleanse unless I can put something else on my pallate in its place. Do you have something for me to taste? S

- Tuesday, November 02, 1999 at 18:55:54 (EST)

A Siren sings a song of power versus need to lure one into a false sense of dependency, the girls damage even the wax packed deepest, they eradicate the darkest mistakes in the bass clef; they chant to chain your spine together. A cyclone spins a tale of nature's powerful song. She waves a hasty retreat into the whirlwind's ending of your room. Paper. Left over cinnamon scones, a milky swirl after coke foam. Her poems written on a peony napkin from the favorite cafe. She landed in your lap after you began having chest pains, repeat offenses of romantic bitterness, the more cynical morning after pills. She came to you on a mattress tingled with hail bullets and malestrom melody. She came to you hardly alive and without conscience. A Power in the world can sing or spin the songs of nature at a whim. The power of a woman's world is not without the incessant contradiction and paradoxes of pendantic punishing pulls to the throat, open while we gasp for some sense of freedom, leaving our masochism unleashed and our bodies unencumbered by silences too precious to be sadistic or salient tears refined by human comforts. ++++ Yes. I think I have. I don't know. I only have the questions you asked of me. You must ask me more. I didn't scare you enough? (smile) I can only be honest and ready to reveal more. That is all I know how to do except lie. (laugh) Do you know how all that could have started? Use your imagination... I like it. S

- Tuesday, November 02, 1999 at 18:53:16 (EST)

What song does a Siren sing?

- Monday, November 01, 1999 at 12:33:09 (EST)

I can't reach you. E-mail times out. Spaces stand still turning while the memory wires my writing I can finally see what this hermit's cape has darkened, has hidden, deep inside of me. S. I want to move in. Tell me the rules.

- Tuesday, October 26, 1999 at 19:16:25 (EDT)

this story was sick, man! you need to finish this...soon! your writing is great, i enjoyed every part of this site immensely. it distracted me for a couple of days at work when i should have been doing just that--work. well, hope to see some more of the story up here, or i'm gonna go nuts wondering about how it ends. thanks for a cool site!

- Monday, September 13, 1999 at 15:13:17 (EDT)

ASK ME

- Friday, September 10, 1999 at 21:22:29 (EDT)

A favorite place for a bear.

- Thursday, September 09, 1999 at 03:03:14 (EDT)

YIKES! The guestbook was *broken*...well, duh, no wonder I wasn't getting any comments. Sorry. It's fixed now.

Please, leave comments! :-) I get so lonely...

- Thursday, August 26, 1999 at 21:19:32 (EDT)

je viens pour promener dans le votre puisque vous etes promene dans le notre. un parc, une histoire, des notions ambigues, c'est un decouvert interessant et pas mal curieux. mi frances es muy malo. gesundheit.

- Wednesday, April 07, 1999 at 17:38:53 (EDT)

Absolutly astounding. I came across your virtual self quite some time ago via some kind words left in my very own guestbook. Though I didn't have the patience at the time to give it a truly worthy peruse I swore to return. I have and I must say I am quite impressed. An ingenious use of talent and technology. I am most definatly blown away. You are quite the skilled writer. I shall return with more constructive comments in the future.

- Thursday, March 25, 1999 at 08:38:32 (EST)

Hi!

- Tuesday, March 09, 1999 at 10:19:20 (EST)

quite a site

- Thursday, March 04, 1999 at 17:36:49 (EST)

Haven't visited your pages, just arrived!

This is...interesting. Will be back to read more.

- Monday, February 15, 1999 at 16:25:02 (EST)

Strange and wonderful as NYC itself...

- Wednesday, March 04, 1998 at 17:01:24 (EST)

An interesting site...

- Monday, February 23, 1998 at 11:51:23 (EST)

Definitely a site worth looking at. Very much in the original pioneering spirit of hypertext. --Your pal Gonzachez...

- Thursday, February 19, 1998 at 13:40:11 (EST)

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- Wednesday, February 11, 1998 at 13:48:33 (EST)

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